By Eddie PatersonPoetryWhitmore Press
redactor
redactor uses found texts from the everyday – emails, memos, notes, lyrics, text messages, tweets, webfeeds – as poetic material. Drawing on techniques from the visual arts and radical writing such as the ready-made, the cut-up and the concrete poem, Eddie Paterson reflects upon the ways in which the historical legacy of censorship intersects with contemporary surveillance technologies. In an era in which former US President George W. Bush’s favourite writing tool was the black Sharpie marker, redactor is a language trash-compactor where the banal and the brilliant meet.
Eddie Paterson
Eddie Paterson is a senior lecturer at the University of Melbourne, managing co-editor of Five Islands poetry press, and the author of The Contemporary American Monologue (2015) and Gameshow. Gameshow. (2012) for the Vagabond Press Rare Objects series.
Judges’ report
These days our text communication is live-edited by autocorrect, where we can dictate a WhatsApp message or compose predictive emails or texts under the table. Most of the time we press send without even looking. We’re then at the mercy of what these apps decide is our intent, forwarding our thoughts as filtered through the crudest end of AI, often leaving us unretractably expressing ourselves in an idiot tongue. redactor is a self-censoring pudding. A hilarious, politically alive vivid experiment. It’s a hand-held guide to finding the twisted wonderful poetry in every banal word we employ.
Extract
bureau of statistics
31 australians have died
since 1996 watering
their christmas tree while
the fairy lights were plugged in
19 australians have died
in the last 3 years by eating
christmas decorations they believed were
chocolate hospitals reported 4 broken
arms last year after cracker pulling incidents
101 australians since 1997 have had to
have broken parts of plastic toys pulled out of the soles of their feet
18 australians had serious burns in 1998
trying on a new jumper
with a lit cigarette in their mouth
543 australians were admitted
to casualty in the last 2 years after opening bottles
of beer with their teeth or eye socket
5 australians were injured last year
in accidents involving out of control
remote control cars
3 australians die each year testing if a 9V battery works on their tongue
142 australians were injured in 1998
by not removing all the pins
from new shirts
58 australians are injured
each year by using sharp knives instead of
screwdrivers
8 australians cracked their skull in 1997
after falling asleep (passing out)
while throwing up
into the toilet.
agoraphobic love®
now have you been out in peak hour & pushed onto the train by the men in
the white gloves one day hope to be i am taller on the train & breathe above the heads of men
had a lovely conversation with ███ about the merits of ‘special’ underwear & why one should purchase such a thing then about novelty symbol toasters to imprint your bread haven’t left the house in four days scared to go out wait for the mailman like the fri ckin & when i hear his little bike i shuffle to the front door & see if anyone has written to me ██ or run off with a mexican musican named leon are you having a nice time? your brother hasn’t called & ███ neither & how can i entertain if i don’t have you around to facilitate the introductions thought i saw ███ on the tram the other day
went to approach then ... whey back there boyo, that’s not ██n ██ but a rather scary
man
with a beard been listening to the cure such is the way of things
marianne faithfull sends her love.
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